S.S. Rose

Hmmm....pretty good, if this is, as you say, your "first attempt at poetry". The spelling errors ("oftem" should be "often"; "Gibrish" should be "Gibberish"; etc...) do, unfortunately, decrease the at

Altogether quite nicely done -- the message resonates clearly with anyone who has experienced bullying. I disagree, however, with "For she has lots to hide" in the third stanza. It ...